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Grammar correction (Score: 1)
by emmaL on Saturday, March 12 @ 21:29:00 EST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Since you have the audacity to insult someone on his grammar, here are the errors I found in your version of the English language.
1. School is important as is developing interpersonal skills.
Should be: School is as important as developing ..
2. My experience as the first Asian in Charles City, Iowa, in 1972, was not as violent
As the first Asian in Charles City, Iowa in 1972, my experiences WERE not as violent...
3. I like Joe's handling of his problems.
I like how Joe handles his problems.
The rest of your sentences are just plain ugly. I can't spend my time correcting your grammar and usage.
Like this one:
Thinking back to those not-so-halycon days of youth, which I do every so often, I got abused regularly.
See the two commas? The trick is if you take off the phrase in between those commas, your sentence should still make sense.
So:
Thinking back to those not-so-halycon days of youth I got abused regularly.
is really bad.
I didnt want to insult, I just want to call your attention that before you insult someone, you should check your own mistakes first.
See, its okay if the stereotype for Asians is - People who writes in bad english. It's understable since English is not our first language.
What's bad is Asians having this stereotype of annoying, insulting people who are stupid themselves, anyway.
This is for all the Asians who got insulted by the creepy, annoying Asians.
Thank you.
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